I got the following comments on the lyrics:
"Vigil": Your lyrics have a somewhat cloudy meaning but drew me in like a vortex. I sense you mourning the emotional loss of your lover who is so consumed by hr own grievous loss that she has deteriorated into a lifeless shell of a person....This is a tragic and emotionally gripping song.
"El Dorado": Your lyrics are magnificently visual. You intertwine visions of "the golden one" and the rituals surrounding his rise as king with visions of pawning for money....Your lyrics are amazingly creative but hard to understand. The title is awesome!...
It's hard submitting songs for competitions which have "thoughtful" lyrics -- denser images that take a little unravelling. The kinds of songs that reward a few listens. Still, strong imagery in both cases.